I post-dated it to about when I wrote it, which is why you hadn't seen it before. (She actually posted it on her own LJ, so I sort of forgot to put it on mine until recently.)

It's not missing stanzas, though -- there's no thematic material to suggest that the stanzas are eggs, if that's what you mean... as far as that goes, I'd say I prefer form to serve content, not dictate it.

I'm glad you like it!